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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2000-09-20 08:15 PM


Chocolate Covered Strawberries

Wine, Caribbean breeze
moonlight, romantic fire
Barry White voice.
Nuzzles and murmurs
fiery kisses and
chocolate covered strawberries.

Promises, white lies
future enfolding past
time really meaningless.
Soft, happy sighs
a brush of lips and
chocolate covered strawberries.

Alas, tis fantasy
reality intrudes
others were first in line.
Yet, the dream persists
so sweet, intoxicating
chocolate covered strawberries.



bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-20 08:37 PM


I'll be right over!!    Very beautiful, Daniel!!

Denise

vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-09-20 08:42 PM



daniel-
   this is wonderful.  i love it.  
   of course, now you've got me craving
   'chocolate covered strawberries'
   ...gotta run to the grocery store now...
   see ya later.  

   -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


Romy
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3 posted 2000-09-20 10:08 PM


A delightful, sweet fantasy!
Tramp Poet
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4 posted 2000-09-21 08:57 AM


ROFLOL!
Ladies! so sorry to give y'all the munchies!
the fondue is warming Denice!
sorry about the grocery run, Vicki!
thanks, Debbie...


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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5 posted 2000-09-21 12:22 PM


Daniel,
I agree with Vicki! TO THE GROCERY STORE!!!!
Mmmm....  Three words for you:  Come on over!!!
Alicia

Tramp Poet
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6 posted 2000-09-21 08:01 PM


my, my...methinks i must have hit on
a good formula!
Wendy Woo just left for the store...
wonder if Hersheys will give me
a kick-back?
Come on over for a bite takes on a
rather interesting meaning eh ladies?
thanks again...


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-09-22 08:12 AM


Daniel~

On strawberry lips
Kissed with sweet wine
Caribbean breezes
float past me in time
Dipped in the wonder
of memories intoxicate ...
If you're still serving chocolate
I hope I'm not late ! !
  

Obviously, I LOVED IT !
~*Marge*~



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Tramp Poet
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8 posted 2000-09-22 11:43 AM


oh my,
{fumble, bumble, grasp and sigh}
where are those darn car keys...
lol now tis I that is hurrying
to the store- must restock-quickly!
Why do i hear a hatter running about
mumbling about being late...thats
a bit odd, eh?


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
9 posted 2000-09-22 06:40 PM


Hi!
  I sure like the way you daydream. Good write! Like a brother that includes those chocolate covered strawberries....hummgoood!

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