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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-19 05:52 PM


Falls down aimlessly,
And re-painting neon signs,
Washing away pain.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-09-20 04:33 AM


Desolation nicely painted........good one maria.

Jon

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2 posted 2001-05-07 12:42 PM


a good one....
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3 posted 2001-05-07 02:08 PM


this is a great depiction of rain. beautiful in it's simplicity, a great read. thanks.
Moon Dust
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4 posted 2001-05-07 07:54 PM


Thanks for reading

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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5 posted 2001-05-13 05:05 PM


Nicely done!
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