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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-18 08:07 AM


Water
Stepping docile
Making timeworn, smooth stone
Doze to the cool splashes trickling~
Music


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-09-18 09:22 AM


This is so nice I can feel the cool refreshing water as I read....and hear the rythem.

Nice

Jon

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-09-18 12:20 PM


I'm happy to have refreshed you, Jon!
Thank you  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


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