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Jack's Been Here (Haiku)

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0 posted 2000-09-17 09:30 PM

Bittersweet maple,
ablaze from autumn's first frost.
Fragile embers fall.

Denise

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1 posted 2000-09-17 09:49 PM

Very beautiful, Bonnie!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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2 posted 2000-09-17 11:14 PM

Bonnie~
Quite the lovely picture.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-09-18 04:04 AM

This is quite lovely.......well I'm no expert on Haiku or Senryu....but I think this is a stunning one.....Dennis where are you?

It's a beaut

Jon

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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4 posted 2000-09-18 06:44 AM

Exquisite haiku, sweet Bonnie, simply exquisite! Love, Ellie

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

5 posted 2000-09-18 06:54 AM

Bonnie,
This is a beautiful haiku moment displayed here for all to see and experience.Excellent!

Jon,
You don't have to be a Dennis to see the beauty here in both subject and form!

Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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