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Moonlight Serenade Haiku

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-09-17 03:21 PM

~MOONLIGHT SERENADE HAIKU~

5-7-5

Moonlight is dancing
upon lover's silhouettes
love song from heaven

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-09-17 08:04 PM

Beautiful, Melissa!

Denise

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

2 posted 2000-09-17 09:06 PM

A perfectly "heavenly" gem Melissa. What a beautiful picture it paints. Bonnie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-09-17 11:17 PM

Melissa~
Enjoyed the picture.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-09-18 04:12 AM

Serene and sweet...

Jon

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

5 posted 2000-09-18 11:50 AM

Melissa,
Beautiful imagery and joy captured in this haiku!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

6 posted 2000-09-19 05:25 PM

Awww...how romantic!! This is a CLASSIC poetry painting of lovers strolling at midnight.
--Little Girl

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2000-09-19 05:35 PM

OOOO lovely

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

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