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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-16 11:39 PM



Reflective Thoughts
~*Marge Tindal*~

Reflecting is a path of ponder
Whereupon your thoughts do wander
Looking back through reverent pause
Often bringing sighs of cause
Often bringing sighs of cause
Looking back through reverent pause
Whereupon your thoughts do wander
Reflecting is a path of ponder


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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vlraynes
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1 posted 2000-09-17 02:40 AM



marge-
  this is really cool...i like it alot.  
  short and simple...but meaningful..

  love you, my friend,  
            -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-09-17 07:43 AM


Your creations are really great marge...love the reflection..

Jon

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-09-17 11:24 AM


Vicky~
Sometimes, short is good, huh ?
Heck, I'm only 5'2" myself !  


Jon~
Thank you.
It's just the way they come to me and
I guess I have a tendency to 'paint'.

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-09-17 11:37 AM


Marge,
  What a creative display of talent this is! Your verse ripples with wise echo! The sentiment and presentation are exquiste!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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5 posted 2000-09-17 01:11 PM


This is totally Awesome Marge!!!!  What wonderful things you come up with your magical poets pen!  I love this.  Bonnie
2dalimit
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6 posted 2000-09-17 10:06 PM


Hi,
I really enjoyed this.
Melton

Denise
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7 posted 2000-09-17 10:12 PM


Now this is a creative masterpiece! Very well done, Marge!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-09-17 10:39 PM


Dennis~
Thank you for such a nice reply.
I sure do enjoy what I do !
Glad to know you enjoyed it.


Bonnie~
This one just fell to the page and then
it just looked like it should show it's own reflection.
I'm glad to know you liked it.


Melton~
Hi.  Thank you.
I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it.


Denise~
Thanks for that compliment, my friend.
It just kind of did itself !
Guess that's the spontaneity of reflections, huh ?

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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