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allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-09-16 05:30 PM

dreaming lost down by the coast
half a day just walking
kicking the stones on the beach
hazy grey skyline
just out of reach
thinking of you
always thinking of you
and wondering
what you do
all is grey
the sea, the sky
me
in this seaside town
wandering the promenade
head down in dreams
spray falls around
I am drowning in the sound
thinking of you

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-09-16 08:14 PM

Great poem, Allan! You've painted a vivid picture with this!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-09-16 08:51 PM

Allan~
I really got caught in the moody grey.
So enjoy my Rainbow Connection ...
sending you color to light your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-09-17 07:51 AM

Phew Allan ...been there myself .....sometimes after a little tiff ..you know nothing bad ...still get moody though...somtimes love can hurt I spose

Like your poem

Jon

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-09-17 10:34 AM

Thanks all. 'Just drawing on my far past for this one... No need to worry on this particular score - though I'm always glad to accept rainbows!

Glad you liked it...

Allan

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

5 posted 2000-09-17 01:19 PM

Ah, such imagery Allan!!! Glad to hear it is a distant memory....Beautiful read. Bonnie

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2000-09-18 01:29 AM

great one allan..i love this

kicking stones on the beach...i can just see you kickin around out there..... BUT..i also was glad to hear it was a distant memory

great writing!

hugs, dg

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

7 posted 2000-09-18 12:57 PM

Thanks Bonnie & dg, it's interesting sometimes to ransack the past isn't it...?

All those feelings... I still get surprised that they are all still there, living some life of their own somehow like little time capsules of episodes both good and bad...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2000-09-19 01:45 AM

allan-
i really like this one.

  what a picture
   you've painted...really caught me.  i too,
   am glad to hear that this is a distant
   memory though.

thanks for sharing.

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet.
-vlraynes

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

9 posted 2000-09-19 02:33 PM

allan,

this is you at your best! very atmospheric, I am there when I read it. In that place, in that person, in the grey ...

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

10 posted 2000-09-19 03:44 PM

Thanks again Uta!

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