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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-15 07:43 PM


Flowing free on hope,
Casscading down ebony rocks,
To destination.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-09-15 08:19 PM



Just beautiful! I loved the line "flowing free on hope"

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-09-16 11:22 AM


Maria,
Gravity controls
The waterfalls downward plunge
To its' destined place

Good subject for haiku snapshot!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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