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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-09-15 07:26 AM


You wrote me a note
Having no idea how
Much it would mean
In the rough times ahead.
I found it today,
And this is what it said...

"If you're ever lonely,
Sad and feeling blue...
Then those are all the times
I'm walking beside you...

And if you ever need a friend,
Someone who'll hold you close
I'm there, reaching out my hand.
I'll never let you go..."

There's more written after that
It's all almost the same
Your words were full of kindness
And then you signed your name...
Reading further down the page
There was one final line.
Pushing into the heart of things,
It seems you read my mind...
I have a mask I wear a lot.
It can be seen for miles.
I forgot to put it back on after I read...

"P.S.  It's okay not to smile..."< !signature-->

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.  




[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 09-15-2000).]

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blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-09-15 12:20 PM


BWA,
Oh my goodness!  The exact thoughts that go through my head when thinking about the man that I love.  I am left speechless.  Thank you.
Alicia

Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

2 posted 2000-09-16 07:22 AM


This is a really good poem...and so well writeen. ..........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-09-19 02:38 AM


Alicia, I'm the one who should be thanking you.  You've always said such nice things about what ever my brains decided to focus on for the night/day.. So thankyou very much..

Lady Lost...Thanks be to you, too...I really appreciate the things you've said about my poetry.  

Take care,
  Nicole
   Broken Winged Angel

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
4 posted 2000-10-03 12:29 PM


BWA,
I sent this to him, I am always sending him poems, and he wanted me to let you know that this is his favorite poem, and he thanks you for posting it.
Alicia

Wesley the Blue
Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
5 posted 2000-10-03 06:48 PM


wow, I realy liked this.  Its always wonderful to know that there is someone out there, willing to help you no matter what.  Great read.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
6 posted 2000-10-04 02:48 AM


Alicia - *blushes*  I don't know what to say.
          Thankyou very much and thanks to
          him also.  

Der - It's a good thing ain't it?

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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