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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-04-07 05:03 PM

Robin at feeder
Dines in a hurried fashion
Heavy clouds approach

Flowers watch the sky
Anticipating shower
Dark clouds, welcome sight

Raindrops splash tree buds
Water dances 'cross each branch
Wet bark changes hue

4-7-2001

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-07 05:48 PM

Wow Dennis, well done! You just keep getting better and better with these gems!

Take care,
Melissa~

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-04-07 06:51 PM

These are all very appealing. Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-04-07 08:06 PM

Lovely pictures of Spring in all her glory!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-07 09:15 PM

3 haikus that could be one three verse poem. Very good. Joyce

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2001-04-07 09:30 PM

First one is excellent!
Good focus, good backdrop.

/:-}==
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coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

6 posted 2001-04-07 11:19 PM

Glad you dropped in, Dennis.
These are great pictures.
Thanks

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-08 01:16 AM

Very beautiful images.
Loved this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

8 posted 2001-04-08 07:35 AM

I see the reflections of pleasant day in the forest.
Thanks
Melton

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-04-26 10:52 PM

i miss your haikus, dennis and was glad to come across this one

hope life is well

kaile

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2001-04-27 09:09 PM

These are sooooo lovely, Dennis!

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

11 posted 2001-04-28 02:50 AM

Dennis,

These haikus are great. Somehow I missed them the first time around. Glad I could catch them this time. So happy to see Spring come.

Dawn

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-04-28 11:05 PM

Dennis~

Cardinals flutter
Feasting on sunflower seeds
Beak to beak always

Gentle raindrops fall
Refreshing flower shower
Daffodils delight

Naked trees blushing
Try on many shades of green
Springs to life again

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

13 posted 2001-04-29 12:05 PM

Beautiful! And you make it look so easy!

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