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Joannak
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0 posted 2000-09-13 09:19 PM


Nodding in the breeze
Golden petals wave to me
~sunflower greetings.

Hope this makes you smile, Melissa....I too love the sight of sunflowers.

Joanna


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Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-09-14 08:41 AM




                         I LUV IT!!                

Thank you so much Joanna for writing this, what a perfect picture you piant of the beautiful sunflower  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams




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kaile
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2 posted 2000-09-14 11:37 AM


Joannak,this one sure did put a smile on my face....

now if you have time, will you care to attempt my 4-seasons-in-1 haiku challenge?

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3 posted 2000-09-14 05:44 PM


I love sunflowers, this paints them beauiffully

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-09-19 11:24 AM


Joanna,
  This is a lovely haiku snapshot of sunflower smiles!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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