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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-13 03:41 PM


The source of my soul is dreams,
Living in one that exist only in mind,
Not actully living in reailty,
Sometimes up there in the clouds,
I sit a top the fuffy white,
And imagine a castle there,
Way up high where my dreams begin,
But always something to pull me down,
And I hit the bottom of cold reailty.


Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-13 05:04 PM


that's life, Maria..up, down, and around..never boring..   nice piece

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Nicki
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2 posted 2000-09-14 03:40 PM


Interesting poem, really depicts life to a T. I liked it a lot, well written.
Moon Dust
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3 posted 2000-09-14 05:36 PM


Pegasus - nope thank god, I get bored very easily

Nicki- thanks

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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