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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
If you say that you don't love me that's fine look me in the eye and say it to me again as i look at you and cry If you can say it to me then i'll believe it's true and I'll try to go on living my life pretending I don't love you I know it would only be pretending and I think you know it would because if you asked me to tell you I don't love you I don't think I could In fact I know it would be impossible what's in my heart is real so if you told me you don't love me I know exactly how I'd feel It would be like dying only I'd have to stay alive with only an empty shell continuing to survive It'd be like losing everything and having to stay a float only there's a hole in the side of my ever sinking life boat So if you don't want to be with me just remember these words i've said don't tell me you don't love me keep it to yourself instead who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream -the cars |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very nice piece..welcome to Passions..think about dropping the "life" in "life boat"..it would flow much smoother..peace  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Going through old poems, looking for something to amuse myself, and I find,...This. You are smart in not asking, For I asked, and now I regret the very words I used. He doesn't love me, but, HE CARES... He thinks that will help ease the pain of lost love... And, he is wrong. Alicia |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A lovely flow to this lovely poem ........ Jon |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I know all to well how your feeling but a word of advice...if your anything like me you wont take it lol....ASK believe it or not its better to know then to keep on going day to day asking yourself the same question over and over "does he/she really love you" The pain will be there for sure if he says he dont and it doesnt really go away i dont think at least it hasnt yet for me..but it gets pushed to the back and one day we'll find the one person that really loves us as much as we love them...when that happens you'll look back thinkin of the 1 who didnt love you and laugh at his loss and your gain Good Luck i hope he loves ya |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I imagine there are many of us who don't want to hear from the person we love that he/she doesn't love us. This piece is moving, jenifeather. *hugs* ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Nice poem. Honesty truely is better than living in a lie. I hope that everything works out ok for you. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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