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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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As you left me laying there, Tears filled my eyes Reminders that what is Wasn't going to last. So quickly to stop the flow, I ran to the bathroom. With cold water splashing on my face, You found me, asking softly, "Are you okay?" Swallowing past a lump, I reply I'm fine And try to edge past you. But stopping me, with a small hug, You ask again, concern in your eyes, "Are you okay?" Yes, desperate to get past, The knowing look you gave me I reply and slip through a small opening. "Then why the water on your face?" I shrug, say I was hot. Then turn around and grab a blanket, Trying to end the chills deep inside. Raising an eyebrow, you say, "I thought you were hot?" Blushing, and looking away, I mumble some excuse. Not daring to say the truth... That even as I build my dreams today, Tomorrow is sneaking in, Slowly taking them away. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed your poetry. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
it's hard to face the inevitible, especially when it means so much..very well done.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah it was heart felt and very true. I like the way it was expressed. Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
oohh yes, good job writing. I felt your every deliberate move. Good read. Marcy  |
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