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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Fields ripe for harvest Cornucopia pressed full, June memory fades Autumn moon o'er fields Moonbeams kiss sun ripened fruit, Crisp chill in the air Busy hands gather The treasures from laden fields Harvest Jubilee |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
OH Dennis; These Haikus' are superb indeed! You captured the essence of falls' harvest and made it all come alive, so much so, that I could smell the burning leaves and taste the pumpkin pie! "The King of Haiku Reigns"! Love, Sis |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Love these Dennis, I love the fall, and I could almost feel the chill that will be coming soon as I read these. Bonnie |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
How wonderful the beauties of each season, which make us fade in our enjoyments of the former and desire the richness of present or coming. You have richly captured here the beauties of the coming season, and pictured them in a very desirable way! Thank you, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Dennis, I think fall is my favorite season and what a grand job of capturing the elements. Good writing. Love, Marcy  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis, another joy to behold....esp liked the last stanza.... Busy hands gather the harvests from laden fields harvest jubilee now shouldnt you write an opposing senryu about farmers facing droughts so as to contrast with this one? |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, You are way to kind! Thanks! Bonnie, each season has its charms,thanks for your reply. David, thank you for your thoughtful observations, and kind words! Marcy, Fall is not my favorite season, nor my least favorite.....It falls somewhere in the middle, yet its charm sings to this poet! Kaile, Thank you for your thoughtful comments. About your suggestion, how about this: Sun parched, barren fields Reapers idle, seek new work Farmers weep in debt Thanks for your wonderful replies my friends! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful job done..thank you dennis |
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