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Sven
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0 posted 2000-09-11 07:55 PM


Just a small note from me to you
To tell you how special you are to me
Ever since we've found this love so new
I've finally realized what love can be

You came to me just like a dream
Taking my broken heart to your own
Speaking the words, making me believe
From that beginning, a love has grown

So I thought I would take this time
To let you know just how I feel
To set my thoughts in this simple rhyme
To let you know my love is for real

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-09-11 08:05 PM


Sven; This is so touchingly romantic! I'm sure she smiled as she read it. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-09-11 11:02 PM



sven..the small unexpected notes are the best    

this is very sweet...

hugs, dg

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Alle'cram
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Texas
3 posted 2000-09-11 11:41 PM


Aahh! This is so sweet and gentle...not to mention romantic. Good writing my friend.
Love, Marcy

Sven
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4 posted 2000-09-12 12:42 PM


Ellie, thank you. . . I'm glad that you did. . .  

dg, yes they are aren't they?  Thank you my friend. . .

Marcy, thank you my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-09-12 08:33 PM


Now ain't this sweet!!  LOL  

I couldn't resist!!  LOL  As always Sven you have penned another beauty.

Marina



It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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