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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-11 06:42 PM


Aries the sign of fire,
And so a firary temperment,
As long as it has air to breath,
Will never falter and burn out,

Aries with its birthstone diamond,
Will shine out unoticed,
And will be there as a friend,
Which represents its stone,

But be warned aries comes with warth,
Stubborn, bossy and competive,
And if aries dosen't get its way,
Beware the warth of aries.


Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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1 posted 2000-09-11 06:49 PM


Whats this challenge all about? I really want to answer this challenge, but first I need to know what the poem is all about.
--Little Girl

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2 posted 2000-09-11 06:53 PM


Its a star sign challenge your suppose to write a poem about your starsign.

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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3 posted 2000-09-11 07:56 PM


"The wrath of Aires"???

I would think that we should beware the wrath of Taurus!!  

Great poem Maria!!!

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4 posted 2000-09-11 08:24 PM


This describes my Aries Daughter perfectly!
good job!

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5 posted 2000-09-12 07:05 PM


Sven belive me you don't want to get on their bad side thanks

Debbie thankyou

Words flow heavily,
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As well as my soul.

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6 posted 2000-09-12 08:43 PM



Maria: an excellent addition to the challenge!  Very well written!  Astrologically speaking my sign of Virgo should not get along with Aries, but I love Aries - they are so fiery and fun!  

and Sven what is wrong with Taurus, I find taurus men to be very sweet although they can be a little stubborn

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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7 posted 2000-09-13 02:50 PM


Melissa thanks,

Words flow heavily,
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As well as my soul.

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