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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-09-09 06:53 PM


Celebration

In the field
where the cats stalk
and the bunny lives.
Our path well worn
bird feeders stocked
grasshoppers jump, play.

Next to the pond
where turtles swim
fish jump to feed.
Grouse run for cover
my arm inviting arm
my lady smiles, laughs.

It’s her birthday
and our anniversary
time invested well.
Strolling hand in hand
as the dog hunts
nature goes her rounds.

Later, we share fire
snuggle, kiss and watch
as flames lick the logs.
Our world content
as we celebrate
sharing sweet togetherness.



bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Moon Dust
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Skelmersdale, UK
1 posted 2000-09-09 06:58 PM


beautiful, yeah just being together with a loved one is enough

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

Denise
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2 posted 2000-09-09 07:14 PM


Very beautiful, Daniel!  

Denise

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-09-09 08:36 PM


Oh, Daniel~
You sentimental softie, you !
I LOVE it ... she's a lucky lady
and I'm sure you're a lucky man !

Wonderful to see such lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2000-09-09 10:42 PM



daniel-
  this is beautiful...you're such a big
  teddybear.     i really love this.  thanks
  for sharing it with us.  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
5 posted 2000-09-10 05:54 AM


yes.. that IS a special place.. beautiful Dan.. a bleeding masterpiece... such lovely images..

Love,
Lynne

Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
6 posted 2000-09-10 10:38 AM


thank you ladies for the imput and encouragement!  As always i appreciate
your comments and value your opinions!
lol birthdays without money forces one
to be creative and really appreciate
those things money can only rent, never buy.

love to y'all ,


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
7 posted 2000-09-10 04:09 PM


Dan, simply devine. The simplicity flavors this with the sweetest of taste.  Great writing my poet & spiritual friend. Love, Marcy
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