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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-09 05:28 PM



Shades Of Twilight
~*Marge Tindal*~

When twilight comes to quietly kiss the meadow
in bathing light of soft adorn
There will be an awakening
of two souls so sweetly reborn

You will come to me in the wonder
of a star to light the way
Through the gates of remember
where we'll await the coming of day

Waltzing across the night
holding hands within memories of our making
Romantic thoughts on our minds
a chance we will be taking

One chance to write the memories
to greet us with fresh morning eyes
When twilight softly gives way to
the shimmer of dawn on the rise

Percolating twilight pleasures
erupting in the glow of spreading sun
finds us writing new memories
as shades of twilight are never done




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-09 06:24 PM


Very lovely, Marge! Soft and romantic!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-09-09 10:17 PM


Denise~
Thank you for enjoying it.
I've got the weekend with these romantic
little muses on the loose !
~*Marge*~



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3 posted 2000-09-10 06:25 AM


oh goody goody, lucky us that your romantic muses are on the loose...can i anticipate more such romantic poems from you?

hmmmm..to make memories together..such positivity and promise

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-10 06:44 AM


Marge; This poem is heavenly romantic, sigh,
those muses are doing a wonderful job as they gently caress your pen with soft kisses and little hugs!  Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2000-09-10 11:25 AM


Marge,
  What beautiful, sensual images woven in this work. A delight to read and ponder!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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6 posted 2000-09-10 01:38 PM


Kaile~
Oh, my ... they are fluttering around here for sure !
You know me - always a target for a romantic punch !  
Thanks, my friend.

Ellie~
Exactly !
They are splashing me with that romantic ink !
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.

Dennis~
Thank you.
I'm always pleased to leave a ponder.
~*Marge*~



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Alle'cram
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7 posted 2000-09-10 03:36 PM


Oooee Marge, I do love to read beautiful poetry and this, my friend, IS beautiful poetry! ...romantic and lovely, indeed.(Shades of twilight, now one of my favorite lines)  Love, Marcy

Shades Of Twilight

Through the gates of remember

Waltzing across the night
holding hands within memories of our making
Romantic thoughts on our minds
a chance we will be taking

One chance to write the memories
to greet us with fresh morning eyes
When twilight softly gives way to
the shimmer of dawn on the rise

Percolating twilight pleasures
erupting in the glow of spreading sun
finds us writing new memories
as shades of twilight are never done



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Marcy~
You please so easily.
Thank you so much for letting me know
of your enjoyment.

Is this the greatest place or what ??  
Love ya', gal.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-09-11 04:11 AM


Flutter on little muse....what you create is so fine.

Jon

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10 posted 2000-09-12 07:28 AM


JonMewett~
Thank you so much for the sweet reply.
Those little muses do have a way of fluttering.
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-09-12 08:41 AM


Oh my, my, my Marge.....How beautifully romantic this is. I will be waiting in the meadow for the twilight to descend this evening, just to see what transpires.  Bonnie
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12 posted 2000-09-12 06:28 PM


tres bien...  your poem is so lovely it has me speaking French, and I don't even know French...
wonderful poem Marge

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13 posted 2000-09-12 09:51 PM


Bonnie~
Oh, my ... that's just where I've been and
I can tell you it is softly lit with moonlight.
Thank you, my friend.

Oui, Oui Mikie~
Vous êtes si plein de baloney!  
Et je l'aime!
~*Marge*~




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14 posted 2000-09-12 09:58 PM



marge-
  this is so beautiful...it feeds the
  hopeless romantic in me, as many of your
  poems do.    

  love ya,
      -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

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15 posted 2000-09-12 10:08 PM


Vicky~
Ahhhhh ! My sweet lady, we romantics are
never hopeless ...
I believe !  I believe !  I believe !  
Thanks for the sweetness of your reply.
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


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16 posted 2000-09-12 10:39 PM


i agree!!  we romantics are not hopeless..we just need lots of time for dreaming...  

great little piece here marge..beautiful images...  

hugs, dg


"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

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17 posted 2000-09-15 01:24 AM


DG~
Oh ... how right you are !
Dream time is the right time ... anytime !
Thanks for the read, hon.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2000-09-16 07:24 AM


As a fellow hopeless romantic, I really felt a connection to your poem.   It is so magical!  I really enjoyed this one, Marge!...........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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Beth~
I'm so glad that you fell hopelessly into this one.
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


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20 posted 2001-12-03 02:34 PM


Just peeking into passions for a few moments to brighten my day with such little treasures as this little piece right here.  

Lovely and gentle....

One of my kitties was named Twilight.  It's such a beautiful time of day.  

Nice to stop in and read a familar friends wonderful poetry whenever I want.

I hope all is well with you Marge!!!!!
Take Care,
Bridgette  

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21 posted 2001-12-03 04:58 PM


Marge, I love the romance of poetry or the poetry of romance.....either way this fits nicely  
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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22 posted 2001-12-04 01:16 AM


JustBleu~
Thank you for 'archive diving' ...
If you only knew how appropriate this is to the joy in my heart this day~ (perhaps you did know ...)
I thank you soooooo much~

MisguidedAngel~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my little heart-spill~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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beautiful
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Sometimes the words circle 'round
finding a heart in wait ...
remembering ... just how perfect
the shades of twilight are~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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