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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sounds of Silence Can you hear the stillness creep into the night warning of the silence coming gust of plight. Here, awaiting moonglow amid the blackened sea reflections of a stranger glaring back at me. Silence and the stillness percolate my heart lonely in the sea breeze sounds, swallowing the dark. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I feel lonely just reading this...and a bit chilly.....lovely precise writing. Jon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well done Alle'cram. This is a dark, lonely poem, with some very good descriptions words. I like your style.   --Little Girl |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is a lovely poem (and it also brought back the sound of that lovely song with same title!!)...very nice indeed! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marcy; this is hauntingly lovely, almost surreal! Beautiful writing, love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure we've all experienced such moments. You've described them perfectly! Well done, Marcy! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marcy, You have painted a vivid scene, richly descriptive, and real! This is so well written! Great job! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ Firstly - this is BEAUTIFUL ! Secondly - did we have a spritual collision ? You wrote - 'Silence and the stillness percolate my heart' I wrote - 'Percolating twilight pleasures erupting with the glow of sun' Now there are lots of words that would be used in the same poetry within a short span - I think it sort of spiritual that percolate/percolating would be among them. Well, unless of course, we owned a Coffee shop !  *Hello - spirit friend ! !  Enjoyed this beauty even more ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
In the stillness and in the silence, Things can be heard. . . Excellent Marcy. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
"Lonley in the sea breeze Sounds, Swallowing the dark" Oh so true. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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