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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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 no-one replied when i posted this months ago in one of the teen forums.. *sniff* I'm going to cry.. ^_^ Yep.. hehe, of course.. ^^ Anyway, what do u think of this? I wrote it last year...Behind My Windows Fire inside, Burns brightly tonight. Emotional breakdown, The bottle just burst. I see through your eyes, They are like windows. But can you read mine? Please say you can. Love, Lynne |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
well, I like it Lynne..  a wonder it was passed over..the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Short but powerful...sometimes I think short poems take more thinking about..nice jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Lynne,well i cant look into your eyes but i can look at your delightful works and applaude you for writing them |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is some well written stuff. Why would people pass over it without looking to comment? This poetry deserves a bit of praise starting with me...Good Job!!  --Little Girl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..dont you sometimes wish you could open the windows and shout it all out--but there are times that you cant be so bold.... good one hugs, dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you!! ^_^ hehe, aaw, that makes me feel better. ^_^ thanx heaps u guys.. Love, Lynne |
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