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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2000-09-05 05:52 PM


Dew drips cascades then drops from her
The sun melts and unfolds her slumbering self
A breeze blows but nicely shakes her laughing
She still can see fleeting sights like memories

A touch so brief but the smile it brings long lasting
Her scent sends me ever higher I must have her
Like pedals peeking perilously over tall green stems
My desire for her as mine like flowers dip and sway

I know she eyes me like a rose with sharper thorns
Her vines though creep eligantly down the hall
Tendrals reaching for me and running away
Her million eyes and textured lies keep me listening

A gaze so deep to drown the weathered traveler
Her smile boils and freezes as a thousand hands chase me
Pistols begging polination so poisonous not me
By any other name she'd be the same


**This isn't usually me, and I think this may be pushing 'poetry' just a bit, lemme know what you thought**

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-09-05 06:15 PM


Bob; Not pushing at all, but apsolutely beautiful analogy of a rose and a woman,
You have written a very eloquent poem , Bravo! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-09-05 08:12 PM


Very lovely, Bob! Very pretty!

Denise

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
3 posted 2000-09-06 06:34 PM


Not really that pushy, more like emotional and visual. This is some good stuff and I hope to see some more soon.
--Little Girl

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