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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-09-05 05:39 PM


Jagged protrusions
as waves crash and polish smooth
sculptures of the sea

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Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-09-05 06:14 PM


Sis,
  Another beautiful descriptive view from a very observant mind and artist heart!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Denise
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2 posted 2000-09-05 08:24 PM


Beautiful!  

Denise

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-09-05 10:05 PM


Oh Ellie, clapping here ... exquisite imagery, well done! I tried a few today, but they pale in comparison to this beautiful picture! Very lovely Ellie ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit



[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-05-2000).]

pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-09-06 02:35 AM


a true artist at work..lovely

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-09-06 04:38 PM


This is so wonderful, great job on this one
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6 posted 2000-09-06 04:44 PM


I love this one, nice haiku

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

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