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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-09-05 04:07 AM


Heavenly Icicles

Slipping shimmery moonbeams shadow
behind the frosted ivy of your eyes,
eclipsing magnitudes of eternal love.

Glowing roads of emotional distance
brandish paved slip knots of reality,
freedoms smile a lunar balance away.

Journey of flowing constellations breath
festering silent whispers toward the sky,
illuminating romantic endeavors.

Solar rewards picnic of desire
cleverly dining upon simple cheer,
pleasantly received through tender caresses.

Heavenly icicles melting to earth
delicately radiated through charms
softly delivered within elated minds.

© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-09-05 07:10 AM


what a lovely romantic poem..great images..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2000-09-05 08:19 PM


Very beautifully written, Gloria!

Denise

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
3 posted 2000-09-06 12:46 PM


Gloria,

This is a beautiful poem.  


                                  Dawn

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
4 posted 2000-09-06 02:17 PM


Such beautiful imagry and grace.  This poem puts a smile upon my face.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
5 posted 2000-09-06 06:01 PM


This is so good Lost. It is a rather romantic poem, and VERY descriptive. Love as it is can be a cofusing emotion, as heartaches and longing are often confused.
--Little Girl

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
6 posted 2000-09-07 12:17 PM


LD: This IS poem, (as someone before me said); enjoyed this very much as you carried the theme throughout. Very nice.  Love, marcy
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