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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i was writing. i was listening. watching. i was thinking in the darkness... because the darkness understands me. without a verbal word-- without a mutter, without a sound, it calls to me. it holds me with a cold embrace and i feel warmth. it chills me with its breath and i feel comfort. it makes echoes of my tears and i hear song; music so sweet as laughter... the darkness steals my breath when i try to speak. it screams in my ear when i listen. it steals the ink from my pen making me write words with my tears. the darkness beats me up; it understands me. -dgvarner |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- WOW!! I love this! It's awesome. The darkness can definitely be your best friend and at the same time your worst enemy...I can definitely relate to this.  btw...really glad you finally posted something... that withdrawel thing was getting pretty severe...lol love ya, -tricks "I have read your words and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ Slightly different for you. I enjoy the solitude of the night ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee are you ready for the applause, well it's deafening. Girl this is so brilliant, even better than your best. If I was the jealous type I'd be frothing at the mouth now. What you do with a word takes me several pages. Yet another really amazing poem! Take care, I love this, 'Bubbles'  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
dg, so very insightful..descriptions unmatched..supurb. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..glad to ablige..wouldnt want you to go into a tizzy on me.. LOL glad you liked it--i posted a "dark" one just for you..heehee marge..different for me? tricks seems to think this "darkness" is about all i do! lol this one was written in a bit of a low spot! but normally i rather enjoy the solitude of the night myself... bubbles..love to hear from you thanks for all the applause!! no frothing now...your replies boost my smile! peg..thank you so much! appreciate such a kind comment  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I dont like the dark Nice peom I can kinda relate right now What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee had to come back for another read. I knew you'd get it frothy bubbles, can't slide one past you can I. I've got this stuck on the 'puter, just because it's so good. The applause is still going on and on. love and stuff, 'Bubbles' |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
This is really excellent! A pleasure to read! |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Dang, it seems in this poem that you truely listen to darkness, dg. But do NOT listen all of the time, for it'll lead into trouble, and most wouldn't want that. --Little Girl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dgvarner, you provided me with this image of a small child sitting by the table enveloped by darkness illuminated by a tiny flame who keeps on writing because thats the only thing he can do.....Scary image here |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
maria..i'm sorry that you can relate to this one...  its not a 'specially good one to relate to... but thanks for reading bubbles..thanks again!! still enjoying that applause!!  honeybunch..thank you for the really excellent reply!! little girl..youre right..we dark dwellers need to come up for a little ray of sunshine now and then thanks for reading!kaile..wow..thats an eerie little image..worse than the one i have of me sitting in a dark room illuminated by a hall light, writing..cause it was all i could do.... thanks all, for stopping by this way dg< !signature-->"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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