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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-04 05:45 PM


Tree, leaves will rustle,
Upon the morning breeze,I
will be there always.


What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-04 08:21 PM


lovely, gentle, soothing..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

kaile
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2 posted 2000-09-10 06:03 AM


the image of a fair maiden waiting under a tree for her lover....lovely
Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-09-10 07:00 AM


Maria,
  I see this not a lover waiting but a mighty tree, standing there proud, providing shelter from the wind, shade from the sun, and maybe even fruit in its season. I can imagine the first green buds in the spring and the brilliant display of colors in the fall. Yes, a faithful sentry, standing, protecting in near silence in dedicated service.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-09-10 07:20 AM


pegasus - thankyou

kaile - yep this ones about me, the tree being life thanks

Dennis - what lovely imagary, Thanks for sharing

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

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