navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Eleventh Hour
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic Eleventh Hour Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
kaile
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-09-04 06:48 AM


When the moon
meets the stars,
When the dark
breathes soft whispers,

A shrivelled lonely soul
flips pages endlessly,
desperately trying to
make up for
lost time

© Copyright 2000 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
1 posted 2000-09-04 08:11 AM


A vivid image you painted, kaile.
Yes.....I enjoyed  

--...chanson~

"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley



deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-09-04 08:16 AM


Looking for loopholes or where he got off track and missed much of life's scenic route on the road map of life?

Good one Kaile,

          David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

3 posted 2000-09-04 08:39 AM


A feeling I can relate to...this is a lovely poem.   ...beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-09-04 11:53 AM


Kaile~
Really neat thoughts.
I enjoyed the scenario.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Moon Dust
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
5 posted 2000-09-04 04:59 PM


"when the moon,
Meets the stars,"

love  those lines, keep writing.

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

Mon Cherie
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers
6 posted 2001-12-04 04:13 PM


Hey!! We just did that few weeks ago!!! It was the dreaded annual exam period...  

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Eleventh Hour

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary