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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Faded Bluejeans And Barefeet Dreams Skipping, twirling, tasting free. Tangled vines and old oak trees. Buttercup stars and blankets green. Faded bluejeans and barefeet dreams. ~*~ Tripping, rolling, warming breeze. Sunshine smiles and laughter seas. Scented earth and feathered sky. Grant me wings so I can fly. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!! This reminds me of a lot of the dreams I usually have...only difference is, I have wings already  Beautiful poem, SpitFire!  This really cheers me up.  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic! I love it! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what a lovely surprise at 1:45am..this is delightful.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
ooh, this is so giggly! ^_^ what a lovely description! Loved it... -Lynne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Love the lightheartedness of this piece. You go girl ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
SpitFire, I had to come & see what you do - this is a brilliant splash! Especially nice to read in winter - brings hope and smiles! Lovely! Lary |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I think I'll join you When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Spitfire; You have perfectly described the joy and freedom of childhood. My wish for myself and all those I love is to feel this way in the heart forever! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
this is exactly what a fresh cool spring day feels like. This was really excellent ,extremely well written. beautiful. sammi Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a nice, light-hearted read! Just perfect to warm a winter's night. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Mr. Nice112 Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26 |
spitfire, beautiful, thats all i can say... All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was great makes me want to go out and dance around ...(ooops forgot its cold outside) and see what kind of dreams I can muster |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was really great. A wonderful read here. I loved this!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love this...what fun imagery  hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears after all its really not that far to where hope can be found" -a grant [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
So light and whimsical. Just like childs play. I love it! How can you save me? When the dark comes right in and takes me, from my front walk and into bed, where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Wow! Spit This Fire is as beautiful like a song! Enjoyed singing you You can have my wings I’ll just hop around  |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
SpitFire.... This is lovely...lighthearted & free.... Wonderful Job! Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 02-05-2001).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
SpitFire, I agree, I agree. I just love the simplness of this poem and the simple joys in it. Joy |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
this is the essence of playfulness! enjoyed this! |
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