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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-09-02 06:48 PM


only a little hill
bump of green below the sky
beloved by me
tiny track a friend
meanders to the top
traced with my fingers
dwells in my heart
taken for a friend
when there are none
only footsteps away
will always be there
when I'm long gone



[This message has been edited by allan (edited 09-02-2000).]
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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-09-02 07:09 PM


Wow!! Cool! I'd like a hill like that...and yeah, the earth will still be around when we aren't...great job witu your poem allan!  

Hmm...I wonder...how many hills have I singed and never noticed those tracks?

Little Spyro T. Dragon


Watching the poets
Passions' guardian dragon
Moves with the rhymes' flow.

Though my body be
Human, my heart and soul be
That of a dragon.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-09-02 07:14 PM


Thought provoking........nice.

Jon

PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
3 posted 2000-09-02 10:26 PM


Little hills can be so comforting. I'd like this hill for sure.

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Honey Bunch
Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99
South Africa
4 posted 2000-09-03 02:55 AM


Sometimes the hill I see from my house...speaks to me - trouble is, I don't listen half the time!  Good piece!
Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-09-04 12:43 PM


Nicely written... enjoyed.
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