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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ball of fire plunges Clouds scatter and tinges black Slowly falters out "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ I enjoyed the imagery of 'Ball of fire plunges' Yes ! Yes ! Yes ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i agree with marge! very unique way of describing the sunset.. i liked this! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks both it means a lot  "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Excellent... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"clouds scatter" I liked that line. . . this was a wonderful description. . . superb. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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