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blackhalo
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0 posted 2000-08-31 12:28 PM


Road to Tomorrow

Lying in a twisted pool
Of my own hate
Feeling the bitter pain
Of tomorrow's loss

Guess you can't
Be lost
If you've never had
A way to go

I'm somewhere in between
Now and tomorrow
Lost more than I
Ever had to gain

Venting sorrowful tears
A smile here and there
As I walk along
The road to tomorrow.


Eventually, all dreams come tru. If you wait long enough!
Alicia A. Renzelman


© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-08-31 01:49 PM


it' sounds so sad, such a nice poem

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2 posted 2000-09-01 04:08 AM


Alicia~

'Guess you can't
Be lost
If you've never had
A way to go'


Nicely phrased.

Reminds me of just why I NEVER use a map !
Found some interesting 'stopping off spots'
along the way.
~*Marge*~


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blackhalo
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3 posted 2000-09-01 12:29 PM


I agree!  Actually, occassionally, I find the "stopping off points" more fun than the actual trip!
LOL,
Alicia A. Renzelman

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4 posted 2000-09-01 12:47 PM


such courage to smile and venture bravely into the depressing unknown...liked this message in this poem
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