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Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-08-31 11:10 AM


Hey, Ku's Toys

Jack-in-the-box Sad
Cowering blessed darkness
Hiding hopes not found

Spin me, pointed top
Conical extremity
Drunk ballet dancer

Driver pedals hard
(Bicycle built for tandem)
Passenger's free toll

Let's go fly a kite
Paper riding gusty winds
Confetti rains down


...chanson~



"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


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Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-08-31 12:52 PM


Chanson,
  I love your perspective of these common toys and your use of personification and humor. Music to my ears!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-08-31 06:09 PM


Thank you, Dennis! I enjoy writing them  ...chanson

"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2000-09-02 02:42 AM



chanson-
  these are really cute...fun to read.  
  i hope to see more from you.

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-09-02 07:44 AM


Hello vicky  ....pleased you enjoyed the images!


--...chanson~

"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley



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