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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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The dark maelstrom swirled slowly Drawing bruised clouds into its core Killing stars as it towered in the sky Fat crackles of light spear down Reshaping mountains, flattening trees Wind-driven rain hurling golf-ball hail Thunder stalking the hidden peaks The maelstrom swirls slowly Feeding upon itself, growing stronger Lay waste to life and limb All found within A scorned woman's eye Alicat |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Now wait a minute!!! I thought this was a 'nature' poem! LOL Ali, this is incredibly visual...love your imagery! A perfect storm.  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
What a storm! I like the end line.."A scorned woman's eye" Joy Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I love the twist! Haha! I love the violent description too! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
hi, good imagery and descript...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliCat~ Just as I was enjoying the storm ... BOOM ! Struck by lightning !  Clever ! Sounds like a sister twister ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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