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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-08-30 04:49 AM




Dancing gracefully
Your love carries me away
Waves of hope are born


With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

© Copyright 2000 Angel - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-08-30 04:53 AM


This is rather beautiful BWA .....very nice.

A moment to cherish.

jon

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-08-30 06:59 AM


BWA,
This is a beautiful Senryu, full of hope and anticipation.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-08-30 07:08 AM


Exquisitly romantic...sigh

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
4 posted 2000-08-30 06:04 PM


Ah to be in love...

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 88
Texas,USA
5 posted 2000-08-31 04:11 PM


Enjoyed your poem!

Brenda H.

kaile
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
6 posted 2000-09-04 06:04 AM


very nice...hope to see more haikus from you
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 2000-09-04 08:27 AM


A wispy delight
Of love inspiring hope
What a glory night!

A mystic masterpiece-Delightful.  David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



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