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allan
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0 posted 2000-08-29 03:37 PM




sun honey spreads gold
kissing the sky with warming
another day dawns




[This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-30-2000).]
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-08-29 03:58 PM


Marge will love this!
vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-08-29 08:43 PM



allan-
   yes...marge will most definitely love
   this, as do i.  this is really beautiful.
   thanks for sharing it.    

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                 -vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-29-2000).]

Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-08-30 07:34 AM


All these haiku sunshine poems almost make me forget the unbearable heat that's been around lately *lol* and cause me to want to stretch out in the sun like my cats do..  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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4 posted 2000-08-30 08:40 AM


Alan,
  A beautiful word picture for Marge, and for the rest of us also!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


midnightblues
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5 posted 2000-08-30 08:43 AM


Ooooo allan!! Pretty pretty!! *grinZ* can never figure out how come ur creative juices never run out eh? *S* Divine!


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-08-30 01:12 PM


Yum allan!
I want to dive into that sunrise and eat it!  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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7 posted 2000-08-30 04:55 PM


Lovely

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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Texas
8 posted 2000-08-31 11:06 AM


allan, wonderful tribute to a very nice lady and with your haiku, I agree.     marcy
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
9 posted 2000-08-31 11:13 AM


allan.....I'm definately feeling the golden honey warmth.  ...chanson~

"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


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10 posted 2000-09-01 03:42 AM


Allan~

Honey-sky rests warm
On this rising of delight
Thermometer soars


*Delightful and I thank you most sincerely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
11 posted 2000-09-01 09:58 PM




An excellent haiku!  Great imagery, I can picture it!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly


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