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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-08-29 08:31 AM


Foggy tendrils stretch
Across summer ripened fields
Seeking harvest song

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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1 posted 2000-08-29 01:43 PM



Very nice, Dennis
Alicia

Pepper
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2 posted 2000-08-29 03:02 PM


Have missed your writing, my friend ... 'S'
I enjoyed this much .....
(Hugs)

Chanson
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3 posted 2000-08-29 03:20 PM


Simply beautiful!  ...chanson~

~"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~

allan
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On the road
4 posted 2000-08-29 03:21 PM


Lovely image.

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-08-29 06:13 PM


Dennis; This masterpiece is the diamond in the King of Haiku's crown! Love, Sis P.U.Y.M.B.
Broken_Winged_Angel
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6 posted 2000-08-30 07:32 AM


Simply put, beautiful..  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

BSC
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7 posted 2000-08-31 08:23 AM


I do believe I saw this scene the other morning Dennis....What a vivid picture you have penned with so few words!  Just beautiful oh kingly one.  Bonnie
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8 posted 2000-08-31 06:48 PM


beauiful, your good at these Haikus

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9 posted 2000-09-01 04:20 AM


Dennis~
You captured the fingertips of fog PERFECTLY !
~*Marge*~


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kaile
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10 posted 2000-09-01 12:53 PM


Dennis, as always, always impressive
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