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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-08-28 12:40 PM


Gaping wound
Stabbing emotion
All I have left
Isn't you

Unending despair
Living emotion
Loss everywhere
Except in you

You don't feel it
Undying emotion
The effect it has
It is pain

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-08-28 12:47 PM


Alicia, you're living my life right now..well said

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
2 posted 2000-08-28 03:59 PM


know the feeling well, keep writing it eases the pain

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
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