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Joannak
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 121
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-08-27 01:42 PM


The cicadas buzz
harsh and loud, signaling soon
end of summertime.

jk


What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-08-27 02:22 PM


This is nice. a similar theme to my Sweltering haiku..think I like this one better than mine..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-08-27 09:06 PM


JoannaK,  This is a wonderful haiku.  And after the kind of summer we've been having here(in Arkansas) that buzzing will truly be music in our ears!   David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-08-28 07:35 AM


Simply beautiful, I can hear that right outside my window.  Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-08-28 09:33 AM


Joannak,
  Great Haiku!
Dennis :^)

INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
5 posted 2000-08-28 11:38 AM


Joannak, another GEM.  Still it strikes me as sad... I do not look forward to seeing Summer go.  Still "That's Life"  Thank you for this piece of inspiration.

INclan

kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-09-10 05:54 AM


Joannak,how could i have missed this the first time round?lucky me for checking on your profile and disovering this wonderful haiku

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