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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-08-27 04:37 AM



So softly sunrise
Sends such sweet summoning scents
Satisfaction sighs


~*Marge*~






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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-08-27 05:43 AM


Such sweet succulence
surrounds such summers sunrise
sending scents soaring


Marge; a beautiful one here, andwhile i'm at it...thanks once again, for all you delicous replies to my poems. Love, Ellie

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 08-27-2000).]

Little_Spyro
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2 posted 2000-08-27 05:53 AM


         And summers' morning
      Its beauty give way to the
         Waiting summer's day.

Beautiful haiku, Marge!!   You paint the perfect picture of a potently precious sunrise...

Hmm...now what if after the sun's rising a knight gets a big surprise...there's an idea...

Little Spyro T. Dragon
        

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-08-27 06:53 AM


Floral scent bouquet
Floating through the morning air
Morning freshness stirs

Ah yes, Another fresh start to a brand new day! Beautiful, Marge!

Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-08-27 03:37 PM


Ellie~
Wonderful response !

SpyroT~
Thank you for the reply.
Nicely done.

Dennis~
I appreciate your poetic response.

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rich-pa
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5 posted 2000-08-27 03:45 PM


a wonderful haiku, i really dug it.  i really like your use of alliteration (i believe that's the right word for reptition of the beginning consonant sound, if not, i just sound like a fool now....oh well)

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

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RichPa~

Sounds so sweetly sung
Repetitiously resound
Alliteration


~*Marge*~


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Denise
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7 posted 2000-08-27 08:30 PM


Very beautiful, Marge! Thanks for sharing a bit of sunshine from the sunhine state!  

Denise

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8 posted 2000-08-27 10:01 PM


Softly shining sun
shining sweetly since soaring
sunshine, swing silent


Ah Marge, love your stuff!
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Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-08-27 10:57 PM



Denise~

Orange blossomed morning
Magnificient magnolia
Sunrise scents wafting

~*~

Karilea~

Sunshine of your name
Spread your beauty on this day
Light up the dawning


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rich-pa
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10 posted 2000-08-28 10:32 AM


hey, i really dig that alliteration haiku!

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2000-08-28 11:04 AM


...delightful...

regards, sudhir

Pepper
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12 posted 2000-08-29 03:22 PM


You've got me 'sighing' again, Marge .... 'S'
So good to read you, again !
(Hugs)

Chanson
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13 posted 2000-08-29 03:26 PM


Witty usage of alliteration, Marge....very nice!  ...chanson~

~"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~

allan
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14 posted 2000-08-29 03:27 PM


Yes, very lovely this. Full of nice sensuous sunny feelings... Thank you...

allan


sun honey spreads gold
kissing the sky with warming
another day dawns



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Broken_Winged_Angel
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15 posted 2000-08-30 06:55 AM


Simplistic and beautiful.. I love it!  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2000-08-30 07:55 PM



RichPa~

Early worm of morn
Digging through tunnel to light
Good morning, sunshine !

Sudhir~

Delight of your smile
Resting gently on my face
You set me aglow

Pepper~

Unbelievable !
Face of friend through God's blessings
You light up this day !

Chanson~

Tiny prismed light
Shines across summer meadow
Laughing merrily

Allan~

Honey-buttered sky
Drips lazily across morn
Scrumpdiliumpcious !

BrokenWingedAngel~

A one-winged angel
Flies in circles overhead
Lighting in my heart

*Thank you all ..
you make it so much fun to write ! !

~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BSC
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17 posted 2000-08-31 08:18 AM


Wow Marge....Can't possibly reply to the first without including all of the rest.  These are all so wonderful, I'm feeling refreshed already just reading them this humid NY morning.  Thanks!!  Bonnie
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18 posted 2000-09-01 04:32 AM


Bonnie~

Heart's humid humming
Air conditioning the thought
Of others sharing



*Thank you, sweet lady !
~*Marge*~


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kaile
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19 posted 2000-09-01 12:41 PM


Marge, this is so creative...i challenge you to write more such haikus, one for each letter of the alphabet
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