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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-26 08:23 PM


              A Simple Touch

He gives to me all his words
For him a simple touch
They wrap me tender, every breath
No hesitation, much

To tempt me when I'm on the edge
To savor him my view
He sways me when I walk his mind
A simple pleasure, too

He feeds me with his eyes of heart
And guides me to the light
Removes the darkness from my life
Caresses me come night

Drives my world of fantasy
My pillow soft, to hold
Makes tears of sad  turn happy with
A simple phrase, he's told

He is beyond my realm of reach
Yet flows with me each day
With every simple touch of him
I pause, I smile, I sway

To music soft, his tune of dance
His walk of avenue
Slowly thoughts of simple touch
Come kiss my world of you

MM
*2k


© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-27 01:13 AM


Lovely, Maureen~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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2 posted 2000-08-27 02:28 PM


you amaze me with your sensitivity and gentle phrases, Maureen

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-27 09:53 PM


Marge thank you...I am greatly inspired by the words of others...and how they "touch" me
~~softsmiles
Maureen

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-08-28 06:18 AM


Hi MM, gurl you indeed have a magical touch when it comes to weaving expression into verse and presenting such a captivating poem like this one.

I'm keeping this one in library thanks for an enjoyable read.

COCO  

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-08-28 11:52 AM


Maureen how simply beautiful, such a gentle weaving of words to make a perfect whole.
Warm hugs, soft smiles and my undying admiration for a true poet.  

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-28 12:15 PM


pegasus111

well that is me  a bit on the hypersensitive side...but basically gentle and tender loving
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-28 04:53 PM


COCO ...so you are going to store me in your library..that is very  thoughtful and kind, thank you
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Elizabeth
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8 posted 2000-08-28 09:28 PM


Maureen, this was beautiful!

Elizabeth

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-29 08:36 PM


Marsha...you make me blush sometimes...I just enjoy writing my thoughts
thank you  

Elizabeth..thank you I am glad you enjoyed my words
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Chanson
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10 posted 2000-08-29 08:47 PM


Beautiful, Maureen.  ...chanson~

~"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~

Jon Mewett
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11 posted 2000-08-30 05:02 AM


It's true words can weave a beauty all of their own.........and yours do it well.


Jon

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-08-30 06:28 AM


chanson~thank you for the Beautiful  

Jon..weaving  is such a nice way to blend words and thoughts ...you are  so kind, thank you
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Broken_Winged_Angel
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13 posted 2000-08-30 07:03 AM


Wow...Very beautiful and heart warming..   Lucky you and lucky man..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-08-30 08:02 PM


Broken_Winged_Angel

well thank you.. I am not sure how lucky anyone is..but I enjoyed writing the poem.
~~softsmiles
Maureen

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