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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Red to Violet Striped against the sky After colourless theme "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Very good, thoughtful, took me a second read to get it...excellent!  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely images the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank you both i'm only just getting the hang of these haikus "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Maria! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, I love rainbows and I like your Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Maria, I always enjoy a rainbow....I look for doubles! Thank you for bringing that image back to mind. INclan |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah I still belive theres a pot of gold at the end off one  "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Maria, well your haiku was that pot of gold since rainbows inspire you to write this one i am a fan of rainbows too |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Kaile - Thanks, i've found the of one yay What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A great haiku! I love the imagery. I, too love rainbows, they bring hope and beautiful colours and your haiku brought this to life very well! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is great! Nice images you've put into my head Thanks for sharing this  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Melissa- thanks I hope they do the same for you Lakewalker - thanks again What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is the perfect discription of a sunset. I like the color that you used to describe it. --Little Girl |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
and may you find the end of yours..in peace, tranquility, and love. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
a_little_girl - Actully it was about a rainbow, but I suppose it does describe a sunset at the same time Pegasus - Thanks I hope the same for you What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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