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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-08-26 11:24 AM


Sunsets blazing sky
Glorious colors aflame
Natures live Postcard

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-08-25 05:54 PM


Brilliant    Another wonderful scene you've shared!

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kaile
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2 posted 2000-09-14 11:53 AM


such vivid pictures contained within the postcard...very true, this one is
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3 posted 2000-09-14 01:26 PM


thanks for sending the postcard

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-14 05:40 PM


Dennis; Lovely postcard, don't they usually say "wish you were here", but they really don't mean it? beautifully done, your majesty! Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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5 posted 2000-09-14 07:28 PM


Perfect autumn piece Dennis, all it needs is the stamp.  Bonnie
Honeybee
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6 posted 2000-09-14 07:36 PM



This is definately your best haiku yet! I love "nature's live postcard" - what a beautiful way to see it    Amazing, Dennis  

Take care,
Melissa honeybee



The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-09-15 12:19 PM


cool!  what a concept!     signed by the big man and all!!  

great one dennis  

hugs, dg


"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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8 posted 2000-09-15 02:23 PM


Thanx for the card Dennis....it's the quickest one ever delivered..

Jon

a_little_girl
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San Alejandro, HI, USA
9 posted 2000-09-15 02:58 PM


This is some good stuff, Jon. I could see the sun as you had described it in your poem.  
--Little Girl

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