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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-26 11:21 AM


Calm lake is mirrored
Reflecting dawns arrival
Silent echoes stir

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-26 12:42 PM


Dennis; You have captured the essence of that quiet magical time, right before dawn. I love the silence that only comes  at that time of day! Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-08-26 12:51 PM


Dennis, Good job! You put me right there, if only for a brief moment. Thanks, King Haiku!    Love, Marcy
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-25 06:26 PM


Very well done Dennis, this is great.
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-08-26 09:53 PM


Dennis,

Excellent imagery!  ...chanson~

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5 posted 2000-08-27 01:22 AM


Dennis~
Truly delightful ...
I shall watch for it !
~*Marge*~


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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-08-27 09:02 PM


Brother,
You certianly excell at these and your lush imagery is lucious to the senses.  Great job!
                         David  


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



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