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allan
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0 posted 2000-08-25 02:17 PM




we are seperate
our yin & yang makes this so
though making one whole




[This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-25-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-25 09:54 PM


Nice one, Allan!

Denise

pegasus111
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2 posted 2000-08-26 01:07 AM


very nice allan

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

deleeme
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3 posted 2000-08-26 08:27 AM


said in the true spirit of ying & yang
our incompleteness finding fulfillment in each other! Great one!   David
                                              

Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-08-26 11:00 AM


Allan,
  I like this one, two distinct souls combine as one, a perfect compliment to the other!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Alle'cram
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5 posted 2000-08-26 12:22 PM


allan, LOL!  your becoming quite the ham, you are! {big smile}

Your great title pulled me in and your haiku is sooo cute.  Love, Marcy

allan
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6 posted 2000-08-26 03:49 PM


Heh heh! I've just seen what you mean! Ah well, they say the best humour is sometimes unintentional!  
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7 posted 2000-08-27 12:57 PM


Allan~
Adorable !  
~*Marge*~


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lotharingia
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8 posted 2000-08-27 04:08 AM


This is cute, allan.
Simple, and yet with lotsa layers.  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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