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The Sea & The Trees New Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 3 |
I love you I love you more more than the sea? more than even the trees more than the oceans strength? more than every rivers length more than the stars up in the heavens? more than the moist cool caverns. more than Jupiter, Venus, Mars? more than the night lit stars. more than the highest mountain top? I’ll love you and never stop. Do you love me more than the breeze through the trees? I love you more than any deep cold freeze More than the waters’ crest? every day I feel more blest more than the grassy knolls? deeply through two souls more than the eagle in flight? everyday soaring in delight more than the glistening waterfall? I hear the sound of your hearts call. I’ll love you through thick and thin like the sound of a delicate pin I’ll love you with every breath past the days of my very death I’ll love you when things are rough always so much more than just enough I’ll love you from our birth with every step I take on earth I’ll love your mirth beyond the skys’ heaven and earth I’ll love you till the oceans dry without your love all would cry I’ll love you when nobody there caressing your tender skin and silken hair I’ll love you with my gentle touch no lovers felt half as much. I’ll love you completely everyday your more for me than any can pray I’ll love you like there is no tomorrow we’ll never feel any sorrow. I’ll love you as my destiny from now ‘til forever be. Our future bright has no mist every morn is heaven kissed Our love flows forever in bliss with each caring caress Our hearts will not miss a beat within their unity. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hi Welcome to the pub  This is a fantastic first post........you'll fit in 'round here just fine...keep posting. Jon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very loving and uplifting! wonderful! ~Dawn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
great first post.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions ....and the corner pub! I can't wait to read more of your poems [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Welcome to the Pub! Amazing first post! alicia |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! This is beautiful! Very lovely indeed! Please check your email for a special Passions welcome! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Wonderful love poem and welcome. Love, Marcy |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah a feeling i've been missing, great poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to Passions. Stick around and read some of the other fine poets here. Hope you enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I am so awed by the love and tender beauty of this lovely poem. I just read your reply to my poem and went in search of yours, and I'm so glad I did. Your response was nothing short of heavenly as is this poem. I hope you don't mind my bringing it back for more to enjoy it's beauty? Please bless us all here with more of your wonderful poetic gift. Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I'm so glad Ellie went in search of this! I certainly hope you come back and share more. It's a nice place to be.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wow! That's a lot of love. Somebody is a very lucky recipient. Great first post. Gene |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is alotta luvin here! I really like it! Welcome to Passions!! **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighhh, this certainly lifted my spirits Lovely. Welcome to Passions Maree |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I can't say more than has already been said. Beautiful! I hope to read more of your work! |
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Mr. Nice112 Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26 |
On this first poem, you did fantastic, every word fit to your love for this person. congates, and keep on writing. All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL |
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