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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-08-24 10:05 AM


Dawn wakes sleepy sky
New fire on the horizon
Night melts into day

Sun on horizon
Promise of another day
Embraced with great Joy

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
1 posted 2000-08-24 10:30 AM


Ahhhh, I feel the warmth on my face as I wake. Beautiful Haiku, Dennis...lovely!

chanson~

Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-08-24 11:55 AM


Once again the 'King' holds court.

Great work

Jon

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Alle'cram
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3 posted 2000-08-24 12:12 PM


Two great, new beginnings. good job. Marcy
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4 posted 2000-08-24 02:05 PM


Dennis~
Exquisitely complete.
~*Marge*~


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ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-08-24 08:44 PM


There are few words to tell you of the magnificence you have created. Just say this lights up the pub with a glowing delight!
Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
6 posted 2000-08-25 12:38 PM


These are great, beautiful pictures now brighten my day
BSC
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7 posted 2000-08-25 10:22 PM


What beautiful images these words have created Dennis.  Just lovely.  Bonnie
Denise
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8 posted 2000-08-25 10:51 PM


Very lovely!

Denise

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9 posted 2000-08-26 07:40 PM


reminds me of a cool sumer morning thanks for that

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