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Chanson
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0 posted 2000-08-24 09:27 AM


*Musical Senryu*

Pianissimo~
Lightly tickling ivory,
Scaling octave highs

Reverence in chords
as dreams awaken muted
harmonizing song

Forte interlude
of soul's naked expression~
Smoothly unhurried

Brilliance of fanfare
majestically resounds
through rhythmic senses



~chanson


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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-08-24 09:48 AM


Oh! WOW! I seem to be a tuned piece of instrument now... after reading this one...

lovely!!!

regards,
sudhir

Chanson
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2 posted 2000-08-24 10:04 AM


Thank you, Sudhir! I love music, especially the piano.
Happy you enjoyed!  ....chanson~  

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-08-24 10:17 AM


Chansondegeste,
  Your poetry is sweet music to my eyes and heart!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Chanson
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4 posted 2000-08-24 10:21 AM


Thank you very much, Dennis, for reading, for enjoying!....You may call me chanson.  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-08-24 08:17 PM


Chanson~
This is absolutely a delight,
both to read your musical enchantment
and to catch the beauty in the presentation.

I thoroughly enjoyed it !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Chanson
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6 posted 2000-08-24 08:37 PM


Pleased you enjoyed, Marge.   Much thanks!...chanson~
Denise
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7 posted 2000-08-25 10:04 PM


Wonderful, Chanson! Beautifully done! I love those little dancing notes too!

Denise

Chanson
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8 posted 2000-08-25 11:32 PM


Denise, happy you like both the words and the notes  ...chanson~
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