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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-08-24 08:56 AM


The Song

The mountain sings,
Soft ground gurgles,
sparkles,
spills and howls

descending
'round jutting limestone,
chiseling into caverns
and curves.

Infinite years wear river-ribbon pathways.


chanson~



© Copyright 2000 Dorene M. Harris - All Rights Reserved
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-24 09:09 AM


Oh Chanson this is incredible. Such lovely images it brought to mind.
Juls

Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-08-24 09:18 AM


I am happy you enjoyed, Juls  . Thank you!...chanson~
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-08-24 09:50 AM


Chanson,
I am having a field day it seems today... with such wonderful poetry all I can ask is where have you been? better still, I will ask you to stay here at PASSIONS as long as ever...

regards,
sudhir

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
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4 posted 2000-08-24 10:00 AM


Sudhir, you are very kind. Thank you so much.   I was introduced to Passions very recently and I've been warmly welcomed. I think I'll stay awhile  ...chanson~
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-08-24 10:22 AM


Chanson,
  Natures' beautiful erosion song cutting grand canyons to the heart. Beautiful imagery!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
6 posted 2000-08-24 10:28 AM


I am pleased it sang to you, Dennis. Thank you  ....chanson~
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-08-24 12:03 PM


Love this .....lovely words...painting a lovely picture.

Jon

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2000-08-24 12:20 PM


I appreciate your words, Jon. Thank you  ...chanson~
MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
9 posted 2000-08-24 12:42 PM


what did I tell you..my song of songs....you would be loved at passions...
so happy you came
~~soft smiles
M

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
10 posted 2000-08-24 01:15 PM


This is such a warm place. The people are all positive and upbeat. Yes, I like it here  ....Thanks for the invite, Maureen!...chanson~
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
11 posted 2000-08-24 04:03 PM


As usual, You can certainly penn a beautiful scene. I have had the pleasure of seeing one of these sites at Carlsbed. Beautiful. Marcy
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
12 posted 2000-08-24 05:54 PM


I've no doubt what you saw is much more beautiful than my words can describe. Thank you for your compliment!  ....chanson~
Denise
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13 posted 2000-08-24 08:31 PM


Soooooo beautiful!  

Denise

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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14 posted 2000-08-24 08:40 PM


*big smile*

Thank you, Denise!...chanson~

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
15 posted 2000-08-24 09:34 PM


it's minimalist in style but it says so much about the scene, i like the way it flows also,  cool beans.

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
16 posted 2000-08-24 09:39 PM


"cool beans"...I like that. I never heard it before.... *grin*

Thank you muchly for stopping in for a peek. I appreciate it, rich-pa.  ....chanson~

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