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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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homeless and hungry in need of a helping hand ...the people pass by sorry...didn't see you there sorry...don't have time to care -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh...now you are talking about one of my passions..so well done with so few words..lovely..I must show you, My Brother, sometime... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Though you may be ignored now, the Good Samaritan will come by and get you to that inn.  Great job tricks!!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very well put.. Short and to the point. I like this a lot..  Even sent it as a card to a friend.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ This thoughtful Tanka is very nicely done. It's such a pleasure to watch talent grow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
This is nicely done. Your message a pleasure to read and be reminded to be more thoughtful. Love, Marcy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is great tricks..very well done sad subject...my prob is......i never know when they really need help and when theyre just someone trying to scam people out of money...thats sad, i know..but its the thought that runs thru my head..my heart wants to help but my head makes me wonder..  good writing (first tanka?) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
pegasus111- yes...a subject very close to my heart as well. i'd love to see Your Brother sometime. Thanks for the response.Your kind words mean a lot. spyro- you always know just what to say...thanks so much for the response. you know i always appreciate hearing from my guardian dragon. broken winged angel- wow...thanks so much for the kind words. what a compliment that you actually sent it in a card. Really glad you liked. Marge- my special friend...thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement. your responses mean so much to me. So glad you enjoyed this. marcy- thanks so much for your response. this is a subject that is very important to me...too many people don't take the 'time to care'. thanks for listening... and caring. dg- wow...such an enthusiastic response. thank you. i can certainly relateto where you're coming from with this... you never really know how much the help is needed or appreciated, but i figure that's not really important. what's important is that i help whoever i can whenever i can and God will figure out the rest. thinking of it that way just makes it a lot less complicated. thanks for the response...glad you liked. btw...not first tanka. remember jon's 'poet junkie'...i responded in tanka. LOVE ALL YOU GUYS!!! -vicky ('tricks' to some) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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