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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas

0 posted 2000-08-23 06:22 PM



Remembrances,
childhood memories,
unrecoverable...
delapidated houses
disregarded...
forgotten

Legacies
rich, poor, great or small
inventors & politicians,
their marks...
forfeited,
generations past
anonymous.

Eternal,
The Dead Sea Scrolls
tablets preserved,
God's Word..
etched in stone
penned in ink, written
..Words..
lasting throughout all ages
Alpha & Omega

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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-08-23 06:28 PM


Wow Marcy, This is wonderful!!!!!  So true, and I love the way you got your point across in this one.  Terrific job.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-08-23 06:45 PM


This is Magnificent, Marcy! Powerful and inarguable, all to the praise of God and His Word. You are a beautiful woman of faith!Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-08-23 08:52 PM


Marcy~
Just lovely !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-08-24 10:36 AM


Beautiful, Marcy....very  ....chanson~
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-08-24 11:10 AM


Marcy,
  Beautiful comarison between the tempral and the eternal! Thoughtful poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-08-24 11:58 AM


Very beautiful .............and wise.

Jon

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 2000-08-25 07:01 AM


This is simply wonderful the clear cut distinction you make between the fleeting & the eternal/the things of men and the things of God.  Very good, my friend,  David
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
8 posted 2000-08-25 12:30 PM


This is very well done, keep it up
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

9 posted 2000-08-25 10:06 PM


Amen, Marcy! Very beautifully done!

Denise

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